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Do you think this would fly in my english paper?

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If she was to say actually travel to Africa and learn how it is to live there, and learn some of the normal customs, then I would assume that her mother would see it as more acceptable that she see it as her heritage, but I could never see her mother fully accepting it. For example, I personally am of Irish descent. You don’t see me running around in a green suit with a pot of gold screaming “They’re after me lucky charms!”. That is because I’ve never had the full Irish experience.
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I dont think she would see that as inappropriate, do you?
 

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you know your prof... id do it... it would be in my personality... i dont know the rest of the context however
 

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If it is a formal paper at a formal school that would be considered coloquial (read: bad) by most professors. You've also got a run-on sentence happening on your first sentence, and your point could be cleaned up a bit
 

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Therian said:
If it is a formal paper at a formal school that would be considered coloquial (read: bad) by most professors. You've also got a run-on sentence happening on your first sentence, and your point could be cleaned up a bit
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lol

I wasnt being serious.

But my paper will more than likely suck anyway. I should pass though.
 

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The Green GT said:
lol

I wasnt being serious.

But my paper will more than likely suck anyway. I should pass though.
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I can help you proof read it if you like

I'm a 4th year global studies, polisci double major student...I've written my fair share of papers (and have two 15 page papers due on monday )
 

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Therian said:
I can help you proof read it if you like

I'm a 4th year global studies, polisci double major student...I've written my fair share of papers (and have two 15 page papers due on monday )
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That would be cool.

If I dont finish it too late Ill PM you.
Thanks
 
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