Commercial Clip

[mdjay]

I just got this in from Cox Media....

Keep in mind this is geared toward our local market here in Vegas...

Let me know what you all think
http://www.mustangdepot.com/graphics/MDTV.wmv



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[n8rsk8r]

doesn't work for me!

 

[5.0StangRacer]

worked for me, looks great, love the last clip

 

[2nd Mustang]

All I got was a screen full of keyboard characters. Looked like a mouse went running over the keyboard.

 

[zookeeper]

I like it! You car looks pretty nasty on video, sounds great, too. I would have liked to see more of the model, though. She was pretty easy to look at!

 

[2nd Mustang]

Mouse still having a field day on my keyboard.

 

[mdjay]

It should fire right up if you have Windows Media player.

If you're on AOL, try openning your connection with Explorer or another compatible browser..

This is the first edit. I plan on making some small changes.

Zoo, thanks for the props. She's the pretty mother of my children

 

[iskwezm]

i like it, but i would to see other cars too.

 

[zookeeper]

Jay, are you serious? Let me see if I've got this right: you get to deal with Mustangs day in and day out, you've got one of the nastiest coupes I've ever seen, and that's your wife????? You're my new hero!

 

[chepsk8]

Jay, it seems to be rushed, almost like the old "Ronco Peel-a-matic" commercials or here in the East, the old "Crazy Eddie" commercials. Can it be slowed down a little? I almost need to be doing lines of coke to keep up with it.

It does get the point accross in the 15 second window though, but by the time I saw each image, it was being Phased into another.

I already have complimented your Mrs. Don't kill me, but maybe less make-up?

You know me, Jay, honest answers. You're still my hero too!

 

[mdjay]

Zoo enough gloting but thank you...

It's a 30 second spot so we're trying to cram alot into the spot. I appreciate all the feedback.

 

[iskwezm]

i also dont think you need to mention "65,65,67,68 body kits.Couldnt you just say "65-68 body kits".SOunds a little wierd when i listened to it again.

 

[65fastback2+2]

i also dont think you need to mention "65,65,67,68 body kits.Couldnt you just say "65-68 body kits".SOunds a little wierd when i listened to it again.

that was my 1st thought....second was, how about a burnout lol

 

[mdjay]

i agree on the body kit line so we changed it.

we are probably gonna change the burnout in the middle due to the stupid truck in the background.

we have a lot of footage so we see where it lands early next week.

thanks for all the input guys. it's helpful to get an outside perspective.

 

[jikelly]

i also dont think you need to mention "65,65,67,68 body kits.Couldnt you just say "65-68 body kits".SOunds a little wierd when i listened to it again.

My thoughts also. If you were showing the body kits from the different years it would be fine though. Hey the makeup is not a problem.

 

[69Rcode_Mach1]

You my man have got it made!

 

[mdjay]

The edit has been posted...

Let me know what you think...
http://www.mustangdepot.com/graphics/MDTV.wmv

 

[65up2d8]

That is such a pathetic attempt at making a commercial that I think you should just turn Sinister, Mustang Depot, and your wife over to me. In all actuality, the edited commercial is awesome, and you have been very down to earth and cool on this forum. I sincerely hope you continue to prosper in your business as you are clearly a true Mustang lover just like the rest of us.
As soon as I get the funds together to tackle my project again in earnest, I plan to buy most everything from your company due to the fact that you are so down to earth and interested in the progress of this hobby. Others in your business could truly learn from the example you are setting, but I won't tell them if you don't. You know the deal: What happens on :SNSign: stays on :SNSign: .

 

[chepsk8]

Jay,

It still feels a bit rushed to me, but MUCH better, more info & you show a wide variety of what you have available now. Good Job on it!

 

[zookeeper]

I like 'em both. BTW, is that the actual audio of your car? What's the specs on the exhaust as far as diameter and mufflers?