Talk forum: 2 word story

[Cowgirl Tink]

StangDreamin was

droolin over

Chelle's avatar

 

[chepsk8]

back at

 

[StangDreamin']

the Jacuzzi

 

[StangDreamin']

on the

 

[StangDreamin']

shores of

 

[65mistress]

Band Camp

 

[StangDreamin']

 

[gp001]

The End

 

[StangDreamin']

was heard,

 

[StangDreamin']

but still

 

[StangDreamin']

it's deferred!























Meh..... I guess that one was okay, but I'm still trying to wrap my arms around that "2,2,2,3" pentameter
EDIT: Of course, "deferred" is usually slurred (Hey, maybe I could use "slurred" somehow..... ah never mind) ANYWAY, it's slurred into almost one syllable - sounds like "dferred"; so I guess it rolls off the tongue properly.

 

[chepsk8]

blurred pentameter

 

[65mistress]

and vision

 

[BDT 1967]

he stumbled

 

[65mistress]

doing'a face-plant

 

[BDT 1967]

into the

 

[65mistress]

Jell-O Pool

 

[BDT 1967]

where he

 

[StangDreamin']

smelled tapioca

 

[StangDreamin']

and jello.